The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart provides information about the frequency of Americans
ate
at fast Wrong verb form
eating
food
restaurants from 2003 to 2013.
Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of people
in the USA ate at least once a week at fast food
restaurants in the years 2003 and 2006, whereas
, in 2013, eating fast food
once or twice a month becoming
more popular.
Wrong verb form
became
According to
the figure, only around 4% of people
in the USA consumed fast food
daily in 2003 and slightly lower in both 2006 and 2013. The habit of eating fast food
several times a week was significant in 2006 which accounted for 20%, while
only 17% and 16% in 2003 and 2013, respectively. The frequency of American consuming junk food
once a week was the highest in 2006 at around 33%.
Consuming fast food
once or twice a month was higher in 2013 at 33%, followed by, 30% in 2003 and 25% in 2006. The percentage of people
eating fast food
several times a year appeared to be identical at 15% in both 2006 and 2013. Finally
, only 5% of people
in the USA who
had never eaten at fast Correct pronoun usage
apply
food
restaurants.Submitted by sharonvanessaw on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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