Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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decades, there have been some significant advancements in technology which highly affect our monotonous lives in terms of working

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of employees. When some people think that overworking time means substantial evidence of a

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’s development, others accept that it means not only poor wo

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a less economically achievement

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. In my opinion, working overtime is not a compass for economic situations despite the fact that it is proof that there is a high demand for production. On the one hand, to become a de

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, some acknowledgments or achievements are necessary

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as high technology and scientific researches.

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of all, high technologies make easier production process and to plummet time which is necessary for production saving cost.

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, some machines or apps give opportunities to

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ollaborations and interactions amongst firms and employers as well as solving problems or creating products without many employees.

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, running scientific researches in a

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illustrates directly the economic and social status of it.

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, some areas

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as fuel cells or solar power cells are not vital for developed countries, but they are very critical issues in terms of global warming for all livings in the world.

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, some countries

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as Japan, and China have more highly working time than other countries

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as European countries, so some people suppose that it is a critical tool to as

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conomical levels.

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, they ignore the issues mentioned above paragraph. Fo

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oth countries, there are plentiful works regarding high technology and scientific researches, and investments to go up economical worth.

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, it can have a negative effect on societies causing social problems

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as late married, low rate of having children. In conclusion, it is not a direct link between working hours and economic su

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successfully, although

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it contributes to the wealth of a

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. I confirmed believe that other factors in the economy are very dominated.