You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter say why he / she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him / her

Dear John, I am writing to
advice
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you that you should try to get a
job
. Since you have recently
complete
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your
bachelors
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bachelor's
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degree and going to college for studies would not make
much
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you much
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happy. Let me explain
you
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in
further
detail. Since you have just completed your
bachelors
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bachelor's
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degree, you should try to find a
job
. Once your results are out,
college
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a college
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campus would allow you to choose
good
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a good
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job
profile
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which
are
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is
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generally not available in the industry.
Further
, looking at the financial condition of your family, it is of utmost priority for you to take up the
job
and support them financially in
such
a difficult time. In the terms of the
job
profile,
i
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I
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would suggest you
to
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apply
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join the accounts related field. Looking at your past results, it seems that
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bookkeeping
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book keeping
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bookkeeping
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is your favourite subject and
thus
you should choose the
job
related to
such
a field. Choosing a
job
in your interest area will never lead you to
boredam
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boredom
. Wishing you all the best for your future. Yours Truly, Aizaz

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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