Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people thank this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The salaries of sports professionals are much higher than those of people in other professions. Some believe that
is the right approach, whereas others consider
to be unjustifiable. In my opinion, there should not be a significant difference between the earnings of sports people and other professionals. Those who support the high incomes of sports professionals claim that the sports stars should earn high salaries for various reasons.
, they are highly skilled people who bring name and fame for the country.
, talented sports men and women can even enhance the reputation of their country by winning international championships.
, sports salaries are only high because audiences and fans are willing to pay to watch their
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stars. In spite of these reasons, there is no justification for giving them enormous salaries since their contribution
improving the lives of their fellow people is negligible.
On the other hand
, there are other professions (careers)
as doctors, teachers and engineers which are even more important than sports and they are essential to keep a society developing healthily. The safety of all creatures, the peace of the world and the improvement of living standard all heavily depend on those dedicated professionals who are making every effort on providing a better world for humans to live. As an illustration, teachers play an important role in imparting knowledge and shaping the character and personality of children.
Similarly doctors
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Similarly, doctors
work tirelessly to save precious lives. These professionals should earn high salaries because of their valuable services. But
is not the case.
For example
, the annual salary of a teacher is less than the single match fee of cricketers in India.
cannot be justified in any way. To conclude, I believe that a huge gap in the salaries of
and other professionals is neither fair nor
healthy and
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healthy, and
the government should enact policies to narrow
pay gap. The government should raise the salaries of other valuable professions and meanwhile collect higher taxes from sports professionals to ensure balance in the society.

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