Every year several languages die out. Some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Most people believe that life will be simpler if there are few languages to be learnt and used. I disagree with

this

viewpoint and in

this

essay, I will discuss why, illustrating my opinion. It is a matter of fact that many languages die out every year and it is

indubitably

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indubitable

that it would be simpler whether there were few different languages in the world.

Nevertheless

, people, who support

this

view, have forgotten how crucial each

language

is for a population. Regarding

this

aspect, I think that each

language

defines and represents people who live in a

certain place and,

Suggestion

certain place, and

in addition

this

, distinguishes them from whom lives in another place.

Therefore

, I strongly believe that

language

is one of the main features that characterise the Italians in respect to the Germans or the Chinese.

In addition

this

, it is necessary to consider that some languages descend from a common ancestor.

For example

, Italian, Spanish and French are well-known as Romance languages and

this

means that a lot of words display the same root. For

this

reason, it is crucial to study Latin as it helps us to understand our

origin

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origins

although

it is considered a “dead

language

”. To conclude, those people, who want to simplify

life discarding

Accept comma addition

life, discarding

languages, think that

language

is one of the main hurdles that prevent citizens from communicating.

Conversely

, I believe that men are citizens of the world,

therefore

it is worth to learn new languages,

although

it means dealing with difficulties, because it contributes to not only to improve our

communicative

Suggestion

communication

communications

skills but

also

to discover the world.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

266 words

5.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Topic Vocabulary:

Linguistic diversity
Cultural heritage
Language extinction
Communication barrier
Linguistic imperialism
Endangered languages
Language revitalization
Monolingual
Multilingual
Language preservation
Homogenization
Language policy
Cultural assimilation
Intangible heritage
Indigenous languages
Globalization
Dialects
Localization
Language documentation
Digital archiving

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

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Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered?