Computer are being used more and more in education .some people say that is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences discuss both side of this argument and then give your own opinions

There has been
constany
unvarying in nature
constant
modification have had noted in the field of teaching
.
Accept space
.
since
Suggestion
For
Since
few
decade
Suggestion
decades, however
decades however
however
when the issue is about
education
is most
rool
Suggestion
roles
role
real
tool
in teaching
.
Accept space
.
there
Suggestion
There
are always seen
spliy
separate into parts or portions
split
opinion.
here
Suggestion
Here
one group of people state that electronic gadget
are
Suggestion
is
more used
to
Suggestion
for
tuition.
while
Suggestion
While
proponeny
Suggestion
the proponent
proponent
claims they negative
rools
the actions and activities assigned to or required or expected of a person or group
roles
rules
of
children
Suggestion
child's
child
education
life.
when
Suggestion
When
considering
.
Accept space
.
both
Suggestion
Both
argument it
Suggestion
arguments, it
arguments it
seems to me both
side
Suggestion
sides
is important in
education
. And both
viewpoint
Suggestion
viewpoints
are explained in
further
paragraph
Discussin
Suggestion
Discuss in
the format
beller
Suggestion
Beller
the majority people support that
.
Accept space
.
computer
a machine for performing calculations automatically
Computer
and laptop are very helpful to society and children
.
Accept space
.
students
Suggestion
Students
can easily get their study material online
.
Accept space
.
To
examplify
be characteristic of
exemplify
,
Accept space
,
local
communisys
a group of people living in a particular local area
communities
and have shared that the
number
Suggestion
amount
of
student
use
to
Suggestion
of
laptop
Suggestion
the laptop
laptops
and they can search by
education
wapsite
a computer connected to the internet that maintains a series of web pages on the World Wide Web
website
also
applications
.
Accept space
.
Have drastically changed compared to 2010
.
Accept space
.
Consequences
,
Accept space
,
student
result will be good in their standard
Converrsely
with the terms of the relation reversed
conversely
,
Accept space
,
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
the latter perception the other argument that more and more used to gadget are effect of
children
Suggestion
children's
eyes
.
Accept space
.
they
Suggestion
They
may have eye problems.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
student
do not regular batch
thay
people in general
they
that
will go online class
.
Accept space
.
take
Suggestion
Take
for example
online learning app and
buygus
a flexible container with a single opening
bags
applications
.
Accept space
.
Then
it would be
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
for not only
children but
Accept comma addition
children, but
also
for society Consequences
,
Accept space
,
the number of
student
Suggestion
students
will be less in tuition IN
conclusion it
Accept comma addition
conclusion, it
can be eventually
comented
a statement that expresses a personal opinion or belief or adds information
commented
that computer in
education
is negative but I tend to opine In
favor
promote over another
favour
of computer have brought in change in teaching
methoda
a way of doing something, especially a systematic way; implies an orderly logical arrangement (usually in steps)
methods

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: