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More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items what are reasons do you think it is positive and negative development.

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Nowadays, people are more prone to buy luxury items.They want to satisfy their urge to being rich.These trends are set a negative aspect of culture.They follow blindly to live high standard.
This
 essay will analyse the mention issue with
reasonable conclusion
Suggestion
a reasonable conclusion
 that it has
harmful impact
Suggestion
a harmful impact
 on both individuals and society. To embark, people spend lavishly on branded Clothes, car, homes and other things.They do it to satisfy a long cherished wish to become rich.They want show-off to the community.They purchase pricy items because they believe more value attach to
this
.
For instance
, people spend on luxury car like BMW, AUDI to avail more features like safety and standard equipment.
However low
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However, low
 price car
also serve
Suggestion
also serves
 the purpose.Especially youngsters spend on branded clothes to impress their friends.
Furthermore people
Suggestion
Furthermore, people
 buy luxury home to consider himself as a wealthy person in public.
However spending
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However, spending
 extravagantly on
such
 things leads to negative trend in society.Particularly adolescents are more impacted by these trends. They demand high end products from their parents.
This
 leads
to begin
 of the rat race. No doubt
this
 rat race to create unrest in society. Rich people look poor people as possible a mere servant.
This
 way, the sauce loses their harmony among people. To sum up, people buying famous brand with clothes or cars
is
Suggestion
are
 a symbol of high living standard.People can improve their lifestyle by consuming higher quality goods.
However I
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However, I
 meet
this
 need they become bankrupt and leads to illness in later life.People should follow a simple rule to overcome from
this
 simple living and elevated NC c
reasoning
Suggestion
Reasoning
 lead to a better existence .
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