It ıs generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or musıc, and others are not. however, ıt ıs sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musıcıan. dıscuss both these views and give your own opinion

I think that being exceptionally good at something strictly d
ipends
be contingent upon (something that is elided)
depends
depend
from your mindset. Even if we may have i
mborn
present at birth but not necessarily hereditary; acquired during fetal development
inborn
skills, I firmly believe that being physiologically balanced is far more relevant than benefits that we enjoy regardless of how hard we work. In conclusion, you can f
ullfill
put in effect
fulfil
your life becoming whoever you w
ant but
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want, but
keep in mind that if want to get a f
ructous
stubbornly resistant to authority or control
fractious
outcome out of your life, you have to work hard overcoming the pain and breaking each barrier you face along your path to the success.
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