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Do you think online shopping causes conflicts between customers and companies?

#conflicts #customers #companies
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A highly controversial issue appears to relate to whether online shopping leads to argument between customers and companies.
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 to some extent I agree that online shopping is problematic, I
also
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 think that there are pros of purchasing
from
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of
websites
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, too. One the one hand, there are certain problems that consumers can’t evade in the online shopping.
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 and foremost, the most common problem faced by regular customers is product quality. To be more specific, the quality of the product is often not the same what is presented in the pictures on the
websites
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.
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, the reason why customers often hesitate to purchase online is
time
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.
In other words
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, the
delivery
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time
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 is not known in most of the
websites
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. As opposed to most people’s thoughts that online shopping saves consumer’s
time
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, it can actually wastes your whole day. To illustrate, because of the unknown date of the
delivery
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, you can’t plan your day. Another common trouble is
limited payment
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limited, payment
 preferences. A lot of times, consumers do not know how
to make
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making
 the
payment if
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payment, if
 the debit cards they use are not available as an option. More so, purchasers are often stuck with the payment options when cash on
delivery
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 is not available. With online frauds picking up steam, most customers prefer paying cash on
delivery
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 as they
skeptical
denying or questioning the tenets of especially a religion
sceptical
 about their card details. One the other hand, online shopping
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 has some pros.
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, if your
delivery
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time
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 is obvious,
instead
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 of going to the stores, you can
do
engage in
make
 shopping from home, saving
your
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
time
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 and money. Another trouble in a shopping centre is that sometimes customers can encounter salespeople which try to influence you
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in
 making a decision or even not only influence but
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 try to make decisions on themselves. Whereas in online shopping it is impossible to witness at
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 an unpleasant situation.
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, distance is another advantage of online shopping. To demonstrate, if the product which customer wants is not accessible in his or her city or country, he can get it from online
websites
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. Overall, both sides, once discussed from various perspectives, seem to hold logical reasons, from my point of view, each kind of shopping has advantages, specifically. Depending on the situation, consumers should make their own decisions.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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