Death penalty is still practiced in jurisdiction system of many countries. Some people believe that this type of punishment should be abolished. However, others are of opposite opinion. Discuss both sides of this debate and give your own opinion.

While
death penalty
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the death penalty
is legal in several countries, here always be people who wants to cancel
this
"barbarian" rule,
also
will be who support
such
kind of
punishment
.
Accept space
.
There are several arguments on both sides of
this
very sensitive issue, and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss them now
.
Accept space
.
On the one hand, opponents of death penalty note that capital
punishment
is
disturbs
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disturbing
disturbed
humans
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human
moral rights, and it is
basicly
in essence; at bottom or by one's (or its) very nature
basically
wrong way
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a wrong way
the wrong way
to make revenge.
Furthermore
methot
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a method
method
of
punishment
for the most dangerous criminals is old, even that
offenders
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offender
is incorrigible and
contradictors
opposition between two conflicting forces or ideas
contradictions
of that system suggest reform or create
new
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a new punishment system
punishment
system.
Finally
, we
are do not give
Suggestion
do not give
don't give
are not giving
aren't giving
are not given
aren't given
haven't given
the
prisioner
a person who is confined; especially a prisoner of war
prisoner
prisoners
a
second
chance to change.
Besides
, many cases had been when
real criminal
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the real criminal
escaped the trial and the innocent soul of prosecution claimed to guilty
by
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of
false claims.
On the other hand
, advocates of
this
rule telling
this
is the most humane way to get rid of a person who does not have moral ethics. Apart from
this
person who did
cruel crime
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the cruel crime
cruel crimes
against society never return to normal life, and be
shuch
to so extreme a degree
such
kind of threat to
prople
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
.
In addition
, capital
punishment
are
Suggestion
is
that they give people an idea of what the law is capable of doing and the criminal can never escape from the
punishment
no matter who. To sum up, we can say that capital
punishment
is the harsh reality of our world.
Also
, on one hand, it decreases the crime rate and on the other violates many human rights.
Moreover
, all these types of
punishment
are not justify
Suggestion
are not justified
are not justifying
and
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
must to find
Suggestion
must find
an alternative for it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • capital punishment
  • jurisdiction
  • deterrent
  • morality
  • rehabilitation
  • wrongful convictions
  • innocence
  • retribution
  • ethical dilemmas
  • life sentence
  • judicial system
  • human rights
  • lethal injection
  • electric chair
  • justice
  • penal system
  • recidivism
  • appeal process
  • clemency
  • miscarriage of justice
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