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People no longer use newspapers and television because the Internet plays the same role. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Have you ever thought of an
internet
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-free world? Most of the people nowadays using the
internet
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 in everything they want to reach
instead
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 of reading newspapers or watching television. The people who’s still using the newspaper and TV is the older ones.
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Internet
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The internet
 will overtake Tv and Newspapers is a very debatable topic and it has many supporters and opponents, but I think that
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internet
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the internet
 is very important for our lives because it is more up-to-date, informed and excited than Tv and Newspaper.
Internet
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 is more updated because it can help people reach easily the specific
information
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, they want to know just by click on a button, the online news is released immediately, so that the reader can find out what happened in seconds and can quickly read news and get updates. All online news sources offer news every hour, while newspapers are unable to print hourly news. Newspaper have to wait for the
next
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 day to publish the updated news.
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 is more informed because people sometimes want to know more details of a particular incident by watching more videos or photos so, they go through
internet
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 to get these details but, Newspapers and television are unable to offer that service. Any kind of
information
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, whether it's about politics, sports or about celebrities and their private lives, can be easily reached.
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,
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Internet
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the Internet
 is more exciting because users can watch videos, films, series in
any
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some
 time with the help of the online channels as Netflix, Shahid, Watch It and etc. The introduction of smart TV’s with net connection
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also have
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also has
 a role to entertain the family so,
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 can gather the people by watching online movies together. In television people have to watch all films without having the ability to skip it. In conclusion,
Internet
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 have a lot of reasons why it is very useful and important for us and we all can not live without using it. Newspaper and Tv cannot offer what the
internet
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 offers the users because
internet
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 known as a site of knowledge and
information
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. So, I agree to
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 extent and for those who rely solely on TV will get more details and
information
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 from the
internet
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 about everything they might need. It is possible to replace the newspaper and TV, but
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the internet
 cannot.

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