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The internet is a great source of information and has opened up opportunity for people to learn over the world. Is all information reliable on the internet? What could be done to control information online?

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There is no doubt that the usage of the
internet
 is accelerating on the fast pace to acquire
knowledge
 on any topic.
However
, in my perception, all the
information
 available on the
internet
 is not trustworthy and to control
such
 irrelevant content on the
internet
government
 should take strict steps. The reason why I believe that
information
 on the
internet
 contains fake ideas is because any person can post anything without having in depth
knowledge
 by making their own websites, whereas, there are some professionals who create informative blogs and share
knowledge
 with thorough studies in order to help un
iversities s
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university
tudents as well as
internet
 users.
As a result
, the majority of
internet
 users get confused to choose the correct solution or option to their problem from so many websites available on the
internet
.
For example
, a recent poll by the UK
government
 in January 2020 reported that out of 70 st
udents 35%
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students, 35
were failed in the exam owing to
follow w
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to following
rong websites dramatically. The imperative steps to curb
such
 unethical contents is for the
government
 to impose stringent rules on the IT department. The IT department should be under compulsion to create a page with security questions and trustworthy certificate for the reliable bl
oggers so t
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bloggers, so
hat end user te
nd t
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tends
o get in
formative solution t
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an informative solution
o their difficulties.
Moreover
, if publishers’ fulfil the condition of the page and continuous to upload fake or irrelevant
information
, they should be charged heavy penalty or completely ban so that they will think twice before uploading wrong contents. In conclusion, I am
completely disagree t
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completely disagree
am completely disagreeing
have completely disagreed
hat all
information
 available on the
internet
 is reliable because people are at liberty to post anything without having in depth
knowledge
. To restrict
such
 unethical
information
 the
government
 must take severe steps with the help of IT department so that end users access to informative
information
 only.
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