Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

It is generally believed that some ex-criminals carry out crimes again just after their release from prison. In my opinion, the lack of effective rehabilitation system and vocational training are the major causes of

reoffending

offending against or breaking a law or rule

offending

crimes. I believe that, reformative steps should be taken to improve already existing system and criminals should be

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the chance of educating themselves. The

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and foremost reason for

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offending, crime

again and again may be criminals are not given the opportunity to heal themselves through rehabilitation.

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plays a vital role in the

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well being

of wrongdoers. 

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, offenders stay in rooms which are surrounded by four walls, and merely

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could be psychologically challenging for anyone. 

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, rooms should be designed by considering

humanitary

marked by humanistic values and devotion to human welfare

humanitarian

values, and of course it is still required to take measures to prevent them

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escaping

from the building. Emotional health of prisoners should be taken into account when combatting

futher

to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)

further

illegal acts.

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, punitive systems should be left,

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we might concentrate on

healing process

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the healing process

. In old times, people used to get medicated through water sound and classical music.

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A similar approach

may contribute to overcome

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problem.

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, In Brazil, there is a compulsory reading hour each day and sports sessions as well.

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, many cannot find a job when they are gone out

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jail, vocational training can tackle the issue of being unemployed for long years and

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it results in less crime. In conclusion, I believe that, there should be a shift from

strict and punitive system

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a strict and punitive system

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for

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rehabilitation. Past experiences can help us understand the importance of therapy. More education should be given to fight over the negative consequences associated with criminals and their unlawful actions

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as unemployment.