In the last few decades there have been more and more cases of famous people being hounded by the press. Some people think that famous people in the media have no right to privacy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays
know there is more and more celebrities being hounded and some of them ma
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may be
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press, but
ome of the people think that the celebrities in the social media don’t have their right to the
privacy
. And I’m
disagree w
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disagree
’m disagreeing
’ll disagree
disagreed
’ve disagreed
ith
this
. In my opinion, the right of
privacy
eligible for everyone regardless of social status. Celebrities
al
so is a
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also are
normal human and there are same with us and they
also
have their friends and family ,
s
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,
o that I think they deserve to have the right in
this
century. Some of their information,
such
as phone number ,
h
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,
ome address or their fa
milt d
a social unit living together
family
etails they will keep it and
this
is their
privacy
, but nowadays some of the people will use different ways to find out the information about the celebrities and always disturbed them. What’s more, the interference of the public to the
privacy
of the public figures might take a toll on their career development.
In other words
, the contribution made by the celebrities is likely to be diminished, which can ruin their entire career. If they are doing good or not in their in their career everyone will know and if they didn’t do well in th
eir job maybe s
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their job, maybe
ome of the people will feel angry so that they will find their information and disturbed them and
this
will let the famous become very depress.
Nevertheless
, we
also
need to thanks to the social media so that the celebrities can do more promotion on
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of
heir product and share their daily life to us so that we are very joyful .
Accept space
.
In conclusion, according to
this
essay I think giving them the
privacy
is the very important problem.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • hounded
  • sensational news
  • unwarranted scrutiny
  • blurs the line
  • public interest
  • pervasive
  • public persona
  • complex relationship
  • invasive
  • ethical frameworks
  • privacy is upheld
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