In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Taking a study break after high school and before joining university is very common in some countries. Many people spend their holidays as travelling all around or doing full time job. There are many demerits for young people who decide to do
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of all, sometimes people are confused regarding their future career, travel and work during study break gives you the relaxation and motivate us to choose appropriate course in university. Linking Words
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, when teenagers are in high school, they live under a strict environment where they do not have the confidence and Linking Words
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to think about future requirements. So when you travel, you gain lots of Use synonyms
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learn something new by deal with the situations. Linking Words
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, if you are not aware about your interested field so taking up a job can help with identifying your field of interest and provide relevant Linking Words
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On the contrary
, there are some drawbacks of taking a study break. During jobs, the student may show less interest towards higher studies and with Linking Words
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reason, education process will be disturbed. Some of them become greedy to earn money from job and some of them incline towards bad habits Linking Words
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, taking a trip for a long time can affect the financial status of the students
To conclude, the disadvantages outweighed the benefits of encouraging youth to work or travel. In my opinion, young people should have continued in their studies to prosper in life.Linking Words
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