Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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It is believed by some people that
loss
of different plant and animal
species
is the major environmental problem nowadays, wildest
opinion
is counted
by
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with
others who say that other environmental issues (
such
as changing weather patterns,
pollution
etc.)
are
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Are
of primary
concern
. The reasons for both these
counteracting
strikingly different; tending to contrast
contrasting
opinion
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opinions
discussed in
this
essay.
loss
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Loss
of various
species
of flora and fauna is increasing in recent time period, that's why it is considered as
foremost ecological problem
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a foremost ecological problem
.
Extinction
of "golden toad" and "Asian elephant" is a very sad news in recent few years. Different environmental factors
such
as
pollution
,
loss
of habitats etc.
are
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Are
posing a major threat to
survival
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the survival
of various
species
.
For instance
, one of the major reasons of Golden toad
extinction
is
pollution
, due to which it got severe skin issues leading to its death and ultimately
extinction
.
similarly Asian
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Similarly, Asian
Similarly Asian
elephant got extinct due to
loss
of habitats. Apart from
extinction
, many other
species
are labelled as endangered
species
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e.
Markhor
in Pakistan, and the animals are in
this
danger zone on the basis of same environmental factors. As environmental problems are increasing,
extinction
of different
species
is
also
going to be increased.
however
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However
, others have different
opinion
why they thought that way for more
concern
to environmental problems related to food production and survival of human beings.
ecological
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Ecological
disasters including
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disasters, including
changing weather patterns, extreme weather conditions, air
pollution
, land
pollution water
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pollution, water
pollution
are of major
concern
because each of them is a serious threat to survival of creatures on
this
land. All in all, these
disasters reducing
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disasters, reducing
food
production
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producing
and making
this
earth and unsafe place to live. In my honest
opinion environmental
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opinion, environmental
issues other than
extinction
of plant and animal
species
are of primary
concern
because by resolving all these, survival conditions could be improved which will ultimately increase
lifespan
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life span
and number of individuals.
Thus
, their
extinction
can be reduced by controlling and improving other environmental conditions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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