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Many people believe that countries should produce food for the whole population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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While countries used to supply agricultural products for their own people, the recent decades have seen a fall in the amount of nourishment government generate for their people. It seems that with the exchange of sustenance from countries, people will not have any worries about nutriment. Governments must make every effort to meet the foodstuff needs of all of their people inside the country so that they do not need to import from foreign countries.
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 subject can be a fundamental strategy for any government.
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 makes it possible to export a big portion of these products.
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, in Iran, which is a four-season country, there are various climate models throughout the home, and it is possible to produce any product in some parts of the country in any season.
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 makes Iran, a provincial that produces the most of its cuisine during the year. The surplus of production can be stored in its warehouses for the times when that subsistence in the bucolic is facing a shortage, and in that case, it can be marketed in order to maintain the balance in the market. It is rarely possible to produce all the items in people's fare baskets in any rustic. Some countries have hot, dry climates and limited groceries grows there, and they must get the items they need from other countries.
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, in some countries, several items of edible grow well, and some foods do not grow at all. In these areas, the government can supply high-grown foodstuff to the people in need and export its surplus to countries that need it.
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, there are some areas that have a temperate climate and abundant fertile land that allows all cuisine products to be produced by the people of their agrarian. Not only is there no need to import foodstuff in these areas, but it can
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 export large quantities to countries that do not have good agriculture. Numerous individuals accept that nations ought to create nourishment for the total populace and buy as small nourishment as conceivable.

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