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Advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world.

#language #world
English became the most widely spoken
language
 in all the nations due to advancements in tourism. It is sometimes thought that English will become the single
language
 practised on an international scale. With English as the only
language
, there will be a free flow of information and people between different countries, but there are
also
 some drawbacks to be taken into account. On the one hand, countries can enjoy a number of advantages with English spoken at a larger scale.
Firstly
, there will be no communication barriers as people will practise
this
language
 from a very young age.
In other words
, the conversation will become easier and without any hesitations.
Secondly
,
this
 will ease the process of immigration, particularly, for students and skilled unemployed workers. To
further
 explain, English will no longer be a criterion for learners and job
searchers
the activity of looking thoroughly in order to find something or someone
searches
,
furthermore
, employment could be shared between various nations at an international level.
On the other hand
, one problem with a global
language
 is that it can harm the beliefs of some ethnic and cultural groups.
For example
, some communities prefer their
language
 over any other because they feel easier to communicate, and it
is related
Suggestion
relates
 to their traditions or religious beliefs. Another possible issue is that it can lead to unemployment for natives of a country.
This
 will create a negative atmosphere of violence among natives towards their governments regarding
language
 no longer a criterion for immigrant workers.
Moreover
, it could
also
 increase discrimination against immigrants. In conclusion, while international market benefits from a single practised
language
, it can
also
 lead to exploitation of ethnicity or job security of natives.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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