In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?

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the united states
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young people are restricted for roaming in late night
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There are known areas in the states which are involved in antisocial activities like
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drugs
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and adult crime
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not only that
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these areas are among those where murders
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teenagers without adult supervision can get caught by
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prostitution and other sexual
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and if they are allowed to be free even if in late night parties and
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night outs
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a harmful impact
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which is mostly a time of their life to focus mainly on a career.
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allow children to experience everything by
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adult supervision is crucial when it comes to late night outs.

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