The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.

The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.
The pie charts compare the
proportion
of
carbohydrates
, protein and fat in three different diets, namely an average
diet
, a healthy
diet
, and a healthy
diet
for sport. It is noticeable that sportspeople require a
diet
comprising a significantly higher
proportion
of
carbohydrates
than an average
diet
or a healthy
diet
. The average
diet
contains the lowest percentage of
carbohydrates
, but the highest
proportion
of protein.
Carbohydrates
make up 60% of
the
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healthy
diet
for sport.
This
is 10% higher than the
proportion
of
carbohydrates
in a normal healthy
diet
,
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and 20% more than the
proportion
in an average
diet
.
On the other hand
, people who eat an average
diet
consume a greater relative amount of protein (40%) than those who eat a healthy
diet
(30%) and sportspeople (25%). The
third
compound shown in the charts is fat. Fat constitutes exactly
one fifth
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of both the average
diet
and the healthy
diet
, but the figure drops to only 15% of the healthy sports die

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