The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.

The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.
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The pie charts compare the
proportion
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of
carbohydrates
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, protein and fat in three different diets, namely an average
diet
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, a healthy
diet
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, and a healthy
diet
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for sport. It is noticeable that sportspeople require a
diet
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comprising a significantly higher
proportion
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of
carbohydrates
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than an average
diet
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or a healthy
diet
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. The average
diet
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contains the lowest percentage of
carbohydrates
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, but the highest
proportion
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of protein.
Carbohydrates
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make up 60% of
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healthy
diet
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for sport.
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is 10% higher than the
proportion
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of
carbohydrates
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in a normal healthy
diet
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,
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and 20% more than the
proportion
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in an average
diet
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.
On the other hand
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, people who eat an average
diet
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consume a greater relative amount of protein (40%) than those who eat a healthy
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(30%) and sportspeople (25%). The
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compound shown in the charts is fat. Fat constitutes exactly
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of both the average
diet
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and the healthy
diet
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, but the figure drops to only 15% of the healthy sports die

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