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Success is often measure by wealth and material belonging. Do you think wealth is best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

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Some people believe that having material things and being financially strong makes a
person
 successful and
also
 think that
wealth
 is an efficient source to measure
success
. I,
however
, admit that it is a good way but not the best because
success
 is achieved by relentless effort and determination. In my view, good health, supporting family and get the desired job in a dream country makes a
person
 successful. On the one hand, it is considered by some that having money and material things brings
success
 in life. I acknowledge
this
 view to a certain extent only if
wealth
 is used in a reliable way. Take Ratan Tata as an example. He is one of the biggest well-known industrialists from India. He contributes 65% of the total amount to the charity from its profit.
This
 brings more
success
 in his life.
On the other hand
, I think, endeavour and dedication are imperative factors to accomplish goals.
For example
, some people think that wealthy businessman earns a revenue of $2000 million, which makes them successful entrepreneur, but, in the perception of that entrepreneur, he is unsatisfied because he still has not reached to his predominant targets. Apart from
wealth
, there are myriad factors to contribute to a
person
’s
success
.
First
 and foremost is health. If the
person
 is healthy and has determined goals in his life, nothing can prevent him from achieving victory.
Secondly
, the supportive family
also
 plays an integral role to make a
person
 successful.
This
 is because support by family members work as a backbone for many individuals and
hence
, they are able to reach their desired levels.
Lastly
, some individual wants to settle in their dream countries which requires hard work and dedication to get over there and have good job prospects. In conclusion,
success
 is defined in various ways by different people.
Although
 some believe
wealth
 is the best measure of
success
, I think, it is a good source as it requires continuous effort and hard work to accomplish goals, and family support and health is what makes a
person
 successful.
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