Nowadays , internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative development?

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On these days, the
internet
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and television programs have allowed common individuals to become prominent. On the one hand, today the
internet
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and TV are becoming the most widely used and best way
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popularity. Needless to say, being famous these days is not easy. But ,
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celebrities are known through the
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, these days bloggers have started to grow in many countries. They are slowly climbing to the top of their popularity through the
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and personal websites or different social med
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a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
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should be noted that some of these bloggers are helping people, who are not yet well known. I support my opinion with following example. So my friend
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come much easier than it was a few years ago. To sum up, television and the
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has provided unp
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