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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best both for individual and society. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #society
Well it’s
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Well, it’s
 clear we see the trend of
marriage
 all over the world and especially in India the mindset on
marriage
 is quite different. Most of the people convey that
marriage
 should be encouraged and especially before attaining age of 30 because they believe
its
it is
it's
 best for both individual and society. I
don’t
 agree with the concept of
such
 things.
Firstly
, I myself want to put in the shoes to convey about
this
 topic. Right now, I have attained
age
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the age
 of 30 but someone cannot expect me to get married because there is lot of roles and responsibilities, I haven’t reached to that pinnacle point for me to get married and take care of one more additional person
to
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in
 the family.
For instance
, I
don’t
 have a suitable job and am unemployed in
such
 situation not only I can
marry but
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marry, but
 no girls parent will give me a girl who is not earning in
this
 competitive world. Another
instance will
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instance, will
 be of my brother who got married at 31,
its
it is
it's
 obvious things take time for me to decide on that. So, as you see there is no plausible cause to get married at 30 when things are still not settled and only when its
right time
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the right time
 its better to get married rather the believing in a myth
Secondly
, I
don’t
 see how it’s good for individual and society and what way it contributes other than contributing
for
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to
 growth of population. Let’s consider a life of celebrity many
don’t
 get married soon because they have their dreams and goals, and they
don’t
 like to get stuck in the reality of
marriage
 which hinders it.
Although
, they are not
married they do
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married, they do
 good to the society by donating money during difficulties, doing social service.
Its
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It's
 always a personal choice
of when one needs
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when one needs
 to get married. Even though some say the form of giving birth depletes in female if they marry late due to less egg Fertility
decreases but
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decreases, but
 I
don’t
 believe that, since I have noticed people getting
pregnant at age of
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pregnant at age
 40 and there is
lot
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a lot
lots
 of medical advancement of
invitro
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in vitro
 fertilization (IVF) where people can still make babies. In
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
 like to say there should be no need to encourage for
marriage
 before 30 and people should decide what they want and when they want,
then
 only it good for everyone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fertility
  • Maternal health
  • Psychological stability
  • Social maturity
  • Economic benefits
  • Shared responsibilities
  • Ancestral customs
  • Cultural imperatives
  • Personal development
  • Career establishment
  • Societal norms
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Divorce rates
  • Life decisions
  • Subjective wellbeing
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