It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best both for individual and society. Do you agree or disagree?
Well it’s
clear we see the trend of Accept comma addition
Well, it’s
marriage
all over the world and especially in India the mindset on marriage
is quite different. Most of the people convey that marriage
should be encouraged and especially before attaining age of 30 because they believe its
best for both individual and society. I it is
it's
don’t
agree with the concept of such
things.
Firstly
, I myself want to put in the shoes to convey about this
topic. Right now, I have attained age
of 30 but someone cannot expect me to get married because there is lot of roles and responsibilities, I haven’t reached to that pinnacle point for me to get married and take care of one more additional person Suggestion
the age
to
the family. Suggestion
in
For instance
, I don’t
have a suitable job and am unemployed in such
situation not only I can marry but
no girls parent will give me a girl who is not earning in Accept comma addition
marry, but
this
competitive world. Another instance will
be of my brother who got married at 31, Accept comma addition
instance, will
its
obvious things take time for me to decide on that. So, as you see there is no plausible cause to get married at 30 when things are still not settled and only when its it is
it's
right time
its better to get married rather the believing in a myth
Suggestion
the right time
Secondly
, I don’t
see how it’s good for individual and society and what way it contributes other than contributing for
growth of population. Let’s consider a life of celebrity many Suggestion
to
don’t
get married soon because they have their dreams and goals, and they don’t
like to get stuck in the reality of marriage
which hinders it. Although
, they are not married they do
good to the society by donating money during difficulties, doing social service. Suggestion
married, they do
Its
always a personal choice Suggestion
It's
of when one needs
to get married.
Even though some say the form of giving birth depletes in female if they marry late due to less egg Fertility Suggestion
when one needs
decreases but
I Accept comma addition
decreases, but
don’t
believe that, since I have noticed people getting pregnant at age of
40 and there is Suggestion
pregnant at age
lot
of medical advancement of Suggestion
a lot
lots
invitro
fertilization (IVF) where people can still make babies.
In Suggestion
in vitro
conclusion I
like to say there should be no need to encourage for Accept comma addition
conclusion, I
marriage
before 30 and people should decide what they want and when they want, then
only it good for everyone.Submitted by nisarg1990 on
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