Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people are living much longer than before due to the development of medicals. People start to think about the appropriate
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There is a huge amount of benefits for maintaining the the month following July and preceding September
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, it is obvious that freshmen could embrace more opportunities for higher positions. Linking Words
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, people can experience something that they always want to. Linking Words
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can have a lot of advantages for both young and elderly people.
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, there are still have some negative impacts for keeping the Linking Words
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, young people need to work harder than before if they want to get promoted. There would be no more empty positions for them if those elderly people are still working. Linking Words
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, some people cannot enjoy their lives because they are busy with works. Linking Words
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, some people are too busy to be with their family, while others do not have an extra time to have a relationship. Linking Words
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age
of retirement might not a good option for both in social and personal ways.
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there are a few of the disadvantages of keeping the Linking Words
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