The diagrams below give information about the Mont-Blane Road Tunnel and the Seikan Railway Tunnel.

The diagrams below give information about the Mont-Blane Road Tunnel and the Seikan Railway Tunnel.
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The figures compare the cross-sections of
two
tunnels.
Figure
1 illustrates a road
tunnel
joining
two
European countries,
while
Figure
2 shows a railway
tunnel
linking
two
islands in Japan.
Overall
, the
two
are completely different in terms of length, geography and the time span required to construct them.
In addition
, one is for road transport and the other
rail
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Figure
1, it illustrates the Mont-Blanc road
tunnel
, which is 11.6 km long from the French end to the Italian end. The
tunnel
has been bored through a mountain range which rises up to a maximum of 3.5 km above the
tunnel
, at a point closer to the French entrance than the Italian. The
tunnel
was built between 1957 and 1965. As shown in
Figure
2, the Seikan rail
tunnel
,
on the other hand
, took more than five times longer to construct, from 1946 to 1988. It was constructed under the Tsugaru Strait between the cities of Hakodate (Hokkaido Island) and Aomori (Japanese Island). The
tunnel
is 53.85 km in length, equal to almost five times the length of the Mont-Blanc
tunnel
. It is 240m below sea level at its maximum depth.

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