In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
fast changing and moving world, most of the women and men are sharing
hosehold
a social unit living together
household
works in their families. As the words says ''
time
and tides
waits
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wait
for no men''
,
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,
yes the meaning is very clear. In
this
fast changing
world everyone
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world, everyone
is running to finish their
works
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work
without any rest. I totally agree with the mentioned logic.
Now a days
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Nowadays
the technologies developed and new changes
are coming
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come
day by day. All these
techonologies
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technologies
are effectively adopted by different industries to reduce the
work load
work that a person is expected to do in a specified time
workload
. But the
tragets
a reference point to shoot at
targets
are more and
its
the thing named or in question
it
directly comes to the head of each
employees
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employee
. All they have to finish it within
thier
of them or themselves
their
stipulated
time
. In order to survive
in
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in this world, both
this
world
both
the men and women have to go
for
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to
work
to meet the expenses of their families. After the duty hours
both
of them have to struggle a lot to drive in the hectic traffic and will reach their homes very late. After
this
they have to prepare dinner and look after their
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
. They have to find
time
to spend with their
familes
a social unit living together
families
,
time
to teach
thier
of them or themselves
their
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
,
time
to prepare necessary arrangements for breakfast and
finaly
after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay
finally
they have to find
time
to take
rest
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a rest
. Everyone says don't
minkle
to bring or combine together or with something else
mingle
the professional
life
and personal
life
. Most of the professionals
spends
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spend
6 days in a week in their office. We need to think that the main energy hours morning 9am to almost 6pm they are spending it in their office. So after they are back to home surely
both
the men and women have to help
eachother
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each other
in their
house hold
a social unit living together
household
work
. So that
both
of them get relaxed by sharing their difficulties.
Also she
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Also, she
can discuss about their future family plans,
childrens
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children's
educational
matters
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
materials
and more even about office issues too. Women will feel that her husband will support in all aspects in her
life
.
This
sharing will
leads
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lead
to an open minded family and
both
of them will be happy and will spend a
sucessful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
family
life
. As mentioned points above I agree with the mentioned logic that
both
women and men have to share
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
household
work
.

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