Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays
education
has a higher priority than working as a car
mechanics or builders. Some people believe that youth should pursue further
education
by admitting into the universities whereas others say they have to serve the nation by working as a car
mechanics are builders. This
essay will discuss both views and explains why I believe further
education
in the universities are important.
Some people say that young people should work
and serve the society. Because of the poverty, some people send their children to work
. For instance
, the tuition fee for higher education
at universities are expensive where the common man cannot afford to pay that. In this
case the government should support the younger who are interested in studies, by providing the services such
as education
loans or fee consumption based on the ranking system. Whereas in some cases young people who are not interested in studying are going to work
based on their interests.
I think education
is important because if a person has to work
as a car
mechanic then
he has to know the basic fundamentals of a car
and its functionalities. People say that younger generations are the future of the nation. In this
case poverty should not be a reason for education
so the government should take care and give a free education
or a scholarship for poor people. Younger generations can serve the society with proper education
. For example
, a software engineer can develop a useful application which helps to start bike using the application. Which means keyless bikes can be operated by using a single application. A mechanical engineer can manufacture automatic cars.
To conclude, in my opinion further
education
at university is important for youth rather than going for a work
. If future generations are well educated, they serve the nation by developing new technologies and methods to implement them.Submitted by mamathaqvw on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite