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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Producing the waste has increased in the society when compared to the olden days.
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 can be involved in reducing the amount of
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 produced.
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, producing waste has increased in recent times. I think the possible reason for
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 can be shopping bags at the shopping, lack of proper management and not storing the food at right temperatures can lead to
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 of food. Producing
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 has a vast impact on the environment. The disposing of
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 Generate methane gas and the smell contributes the greenhouse effect it produces a harmful bacteria in the surroundings. When we go out To reduce
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 problem
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 should bring awareness in public by advertising
wastage
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 reduction. As plastic stays long in the soil and it spoils the soils health and composition.
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Government
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The government
 should ban plastic bags and use paper bags
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 of them.
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Also governments
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Also, governments
 should place the trash bins in public places like parks, shopping malls etc. The
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 should bring a rule to pay the huge fines if the people are not making use of trash bins and allocating dumping areas. The people should be fined if they are not being responsible for the disposal of trash. When we go in To conclude,
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government
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the government
 should take a responsibility in reducing the
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, it actually causes an environmental damage. People should be responsible in obeying and following the words of the
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 so that they can save the nature and keep their surroundings clean.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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