Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibilities for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The United Nations have identified around 50 countries around the globe which can be categorised as poor developing nations due to their sub-standard quality of essential public services

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as health, education, transport etc. These nations must strive to improve the quality of its public services and

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developed nations like US, UK and France play an important role in aiding these developing nations to raise their standard of living.

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would not only help the developing

nation

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, but will

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help the richer

nation

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to develop its own image

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in

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world

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forum.

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, many criticise their governments for financially helping the poorer countries stating that it would

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lead

to increased

corruption

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in the developing economies. In my opinion, the richer countries should help

the poorer

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the poorest

countries in improving its basic public services as it is beneficial for both. On one hand, people belonging to the

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nation's

state that the financial help provide to these

under developed

relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply

underdeveloped

countries, to improve their infrastructure, would be misused by the public of that

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.

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misuse would mainly arise because of the

corruption

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in the

country

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, as much its population is illiterate.

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, the

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Bank recently published their report on the causes of

corruption

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in a

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, listed low illiteracy rate and instable coalition governments as the top reasons.

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, the governments of

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developing

countries may face an uproar from its citizen as they would be spending their

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taxpayers'

taxpayers

taxpayer

money on other countries rather than spending it on its own people. In a recent event, the Indian Government faced back slash from its countrymen, when the authorities decided to invest 0.5% of their GDP in developing infrastructure

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in

Congo and African countries.

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, helping the poorer countries has benefits of its own. One of the advantages for the developed

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in aiding these countries is that it would help project a better image of itself at an international level. Other richer countries of the globe would appreciate the kind of aid they provide to these under developed nations and help emerge as a

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leader.

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, these

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relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply

underdeveloped

countries, due to

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and below standard living conditions, can become sources of new diseases.

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, when an

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nation

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invest

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invests

in improving the medical facilities of that

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, it

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has an opportunity to research about these deadly

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diseases

.

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would be beneficial not only for the developing nations, but

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for the

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as they would be in a better position to protect its citizen if any outbreak occurs.

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, since the US had already

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set up

its medical facilities and research centre in African countries, the outbreak of Ebola was effectively contained within

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this nation

these nations

and a cure for the disease was developed and distributed around the

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.

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, helping the developing

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in improving their public service infrastructure helps the richer

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to project itself as a

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leader, while

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strengthing

make strong or stronger

strengthen

strengthening

strengthens

its own medical facilities through research on fatal diseases. In conclusion, these advantages of aiding the poorer countries outweighs the negative implications

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as increased

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in developing economy and the possibility of facing a back slash from its own people, and in my opinion, the

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countries of the

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should help the developing countries