It is generally agreed that society benefits from the works of its members. Compare the contribution of artists to society with the contributions of scientists to society.

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members, especially
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the contribution
ntists and artists which are very similar in terms of inspiration to people and aid to national income. The
first
similarity is both members of
society
artists and scientists is that impress to their community.They are role mod
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role models
the role model
a role model
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scientists and art
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Likewise, scientists
ists influence with their hard working and making success.
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goal
sacrificed his life for achievement and arriving his aim.So, he push the
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ntly, he obtains his target and success.
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a artist
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study and work during a long period.She has
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some goals .
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hard working
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in
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research, observe
eople who are especially adults and teenagers tend to impress from celebrity persons
such
as artists and scientists.Participation of artists and scientis
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scientist
ity supply numerous of benefits to their countries.They are vital in
spiration source for the
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the vital inspiration source
a vital inspiration source
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Second
similarity of utility of contribu
tion of arti
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contributions
the contribution
sts and scientists to
society
is that they absolutely aid to their national incomes. Countries increasi
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are increasingly making
money from their accomplished person.A scientist can find a medicine , a mac
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an
al breakthrough. These findings mention countries development rate.
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, Countries draw several advantages from these breakthroughs. Eventually,scienti
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ts curicual
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, artist
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s show some similarity for contribution to income. When a actor
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successful, it
ell-know all countries.
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much
all around the world es
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world, especially
woman take wid
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takes
rt of his fan.
Also
Arabic girls wanted to learn Turkish because of meeting him.
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circumstance will be
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will be increased
s incomes.
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Likewise, artists
entists supply benefits of their national incomes.
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s more f
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
amous. In conclusion, these two members of
society
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countries, scientists
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artists'
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