It is generally agreed that society benefits from the works of its members. Compare the contribution of artists to society with the contributions of scientists to society.
Nowadays, study and work during a long period.She has
society
supply more be
nefits from its members Suggestion
supplies
especially , scienti
sts and artists.SmilarlySuggestion
members, especially
contrib
uSuggestion
Similarly
tion of scie
ntists and artists which are very similar in terms of inspiration to people and aid to national income.
The Suggestion
the contribution
first
similarity is both members of society
artists and scientists is that impress to their community.They are role model for the
ir folk.Suggestion
role models
the role model
a role model
Likewise
scientists and art
ists influence with their hard working and making success.Accept comma addition
Likewise, scientists
To illu
strate, a scientist begin toSuggestion
a success
stud
y in early ages.Suggestion
begins
Thus
, he set a goals and he
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goal
bou
ndaries .Suggestion
pushes
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.
Likewise
a artistSuggestion
an
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ing persons
. They immediately influence to theirSuggestion
hard working
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in
society
in this
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research, observe
such
as artists and scientists.Participation of artists and scientists commun
ity supply numerous of benefits to their countries.They are vital inSuggestion
scientist
spiration source for the
ir folk and their country.
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the vital inspiration source
a vital inspiration source
Second
similarity of utility of contribution of arti
sts and scientists to Suggestion
contributions
the contribution
society
is that they absolutely aid to their national incomes. Countries increasingly make so much
money from their accomplished person.A scientist can find a medicine , a macSuggestion
are increasingly making
hi
ne or a essentAccept space
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i
al breakthrough. These findings mention countries development rate.Suggestion
an
Moreover
, Countries draw several advantages from these breakthroughs. Eventually,scientis
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contrib
ute to their country’s national income.Smilarly, artist
s show some similarity for contribution to income. When a actor Suggestion
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successful, it
For instance
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,
ire
all around the world esSuggestion
much
pecially, Arabic
woman take widAccept comma addition
world, especially
e pa
rt of his fan.Suggestion
takes
Also
Arabic girls wanted to learn Turkish because of meeting him.This
circumstance will be increase Turkey'
s incomes. Suggestion
will be increased
Likewise
artists and sci
entists supply benefits of their national incomes.Accept comma addition
Likewise, artists
Besides
, they will make their countires more f
amous.
In conclusion, these two members of a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
society
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luen
ce to folk and take profit for economy of them or themselves
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