Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to help him/her to move explain how exactly you can help ask him/her some questions about the new house

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Hello

dea

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dear

Sarah, I am so glad that you

finally

managed to buy your dream house. I heard you are going to move before summer so let me know if your plans change. I will be here until the end of June and I have got plenty of free time currently that already planned to spend with you . There is some

special

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designed extremely protective and handy packaging for clothing within my mothers's house that I can borrow

them

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apply

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to use for you.

Moreover

, since you never get by with screwers and

this

kind of utensils , I would take care of any assembling if needed. It would be awesome if you could tell me more in advance because I am so curious

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about what

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all the architecture and materials look like. Back

then

you were interested in bohemian style but now I assume you would have gone for more modern style furniture , send me some photos when you are available. I cannot wait to see you and join to help you out. Love you, Narges

Submitted by Narges on Mon Jun 03 2024

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coherence cohesion

While your letter is well-structured overall, try to ensure each paragraph addresses just one main idea. This will improve readability.

general

Be careful with minor grammatical errors, such as 'screwers' which should be 'screwdrivers'. These small mistakes can affect the clarity of your writing.

task response

You have addressed all the task points comprehensively, offering help, explaining how you can assist, and asking relevant questions about the new house.

task response

The tone of your letter is friendly and supportive, which suits the context well.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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