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Band 6

Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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To help in solving
transportation
 and
traffic
 problems, some argue people should live in cities not in
suburbs
Suggestion
the suburbs
 and countrysides. I completely disagree with
this
 view since many workplaces need to transform outside of cities and authorities ponder the impact of bringing
limitatingon
 of a
car
usage
.
First
 of all moving
population
Suggestion
populations
 into cities would double the
transportation
 problems as there will be no free space at all.
Instead
 of bringing people to the cities it would logically transform workplaces like big factories, companies, universities, hospitals and schools in
suburbs
Suggestion
the suburbs
 and countrysides.
In other words
, people would not need to drive in the
city
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 which in fact will reduce the number of cars and busses on the roads. In
this
 way, people would not need to come to the
city
 in order to work or study. In fact, many counties are now investigating the
transportation
 system and implementing the same strategy, moving the workplaces outside of the
city
. The other way to solve
transportation
 problems is to limit
car
usage
. There is no doubt
car
 manufacturing is expanding at a great speed and
car
 prices are very low nowadays.
This
 situation is enough for individuals to buy a new
car
 for each family member. As enhancing numbers in cars led to the huge problems in
transportation
 and
traffic
 systems. Here, authorities of the
city
 need to implement limits on
car
usage
 where people would have
leave
Suggestion
left
 to choose alternative methods of travel ways like using public
transportation
.
For instance
, the authorities of Istanbul set up the tax legislation rules where people do not want to pay for extra money for taxes. It eases Istanbul
city
traffic
 on a great scale. In conclusion, by moving the workplaces out of the
city
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 and setting the limitation of
car
usage
 would help the government to solve
traffic
 and
transportation
 problems.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public transportation
  • traffic congestion
  • private vehicles
  • urban areas
  • long commutes
  • population density
  • sustainable transportation
  • efficient transportation options
  • cycling lanes
  • pedestrian pathways
  • advanced transit systems
  • overcrowding
  • transportation infrastructure
  • urban development
  • pollution
  • quality of life
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