Fast food is becoming a part of people's daily life everywhere, and this has had negative effects on our lifestyles and diet.Do you agree with this statement?

#food #part #people #life #effects #lifestyles #diet

In today's era the fitness is

vital role

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a vital role

for prominent in cultural society and It's only depends on what kinds of

food

are

consume

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consumed

However

, fast

food

is more likely

prefare

like better; value more highly

prefer

preferred

rather than dietary foods by people and it's proven that it has

bunch

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a bunch

of negative effects on stomach cycle. To commence with

fast

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the fast food trend

food

trend. Today's era are more dependent on

readyment

food whereas

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food, whereas

people can meet their friends and relatives and

taste

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tastiest

tasteless

variety of instant

food

dishes.

For example

, A survey

has been depict

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has been depicted

that In India most of the college students

are get

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are getting

get

together at a fast

food

store rather grouping at home. Which means they don't have to make up dishes at home, and enjoy delicious dishes.

However

, there has lots of demerits influence by consuming

premade

or unhealthy foods. Fast

food

like as - Pizza

Accept space

sub

Accept space

and sandwiches. It has been made up while ago when

it's

the thing named or in question

its

comes to eat, because the main base should be need long time to catch up

food

standards.

For instance

, the pizza base has been made a day ago, which

ahs

have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense

has

been proven by an article was published by Pizza hut which is

wel

(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')

well

known pizza brand.

Consequently

, it's very harmful on dietary function, as

result people

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a result, people

a result people

are gaining weight and more obese.

Moreover

this

kinds

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kind

of fast

food

leads to disease like, diabetes and high blood pressure. To sum up, fast

food

should be

avoid

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avoided

by people which has

worsen

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worsened

effects on physical and metal body.

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Topic Vocabulary:

processed foods
nutrient deficiency
culinary practices
obesity
heart disease
diabetes
convenient
overconsumption
environmental impact
mental health
traditional diets
packaging waste
affordability
accessibility
balanced diet
health risks
eating habits
unhealthy fats
sugars
salt

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Fast food is becoming a part of people's daily life everywhere, and this has had negative effects on our lifestyles and diet.Do you agree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors, and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

Some people think that the media(such as newspaper) should be allowed to publish information about people's private lives. Other, however, think that there should be controls to stop the media publishing this kind of information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shop and on public transport, others argue that people should be free to use their mobiles wherever they like.

Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay taxes to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?