Fast food is becoming a part of people's daily life everywhere, and this has had negative effects on our lifestyles and diet.Do you agree with this statement?

In today's era the fitness is
vital role
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a vital role
for prominent in cultural society and It's only depends on what kinds of
food
are
consume
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consumed
.
However
, fast
food
is more likely
prefare
like better; value more highly
prefer
preferred
rather than dietary foods by people and it's proven that it has
bunch
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a bunch
of negative effects on stomach cycle. To commence with
fast
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the fast food trend
food
trend. Today's era are more dependent on
readyment
food whereas
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food, whereas
people can meet their friends and relatives and
taste
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tastiest
tasteless
variety of instant
food
dishes.
For example
, A survey
has been depict
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has been depicted
that In India most of the college students
are get
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are getting
get
together at a fast
food
store rather grouping at home. Which means they don't have to make up dishes at home, and enjoy delicious dishes.
However
, there has lots of demerits influence by consuming
premade
or unhealthy foods. Fast
food
like as - Pizza
,
Accept space
,
sub
,
Accept space
,
and sandwiches. It has been made up while ago when
it's
the thing named or in question
it
its
comes to eat, because the main base should be need long time to catch up
food
standards.
For instance
, the pizza base has been made a day ago, which
ahs
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
has
been proven by an article was published by Pizza hut which is
wel
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
well
known pizza brand.
Consequently
, it's very harmful on dietary function, as
result people
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a result, people
a result people
are gaining weight and more obese.
Moreover
,
this
kinds
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kind
of fast
food
leads to disease like, diabetes and high blood pressure. To sum up, fast
food
should be
avoid
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avoided
by people which has
worsen
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worsened
effects on physical and metal body.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • processed foods
  • nutrient deficiency
  • culinary practices
  • obesity
  • heart disease
  • diabetes
  • convenient
  • overconsumption
  • environmental impact
  • mental health
  • traditional diets
  • packaging waste
  • affordability
  • accessibility
  • balanced diet
  • health risks
  • eating habits
  • unhealthy fats
  • sugars
  • salt
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