You have recently moved to a different house/apartment. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter: – Explain why you have moved – Describe the new house/apartment – Invite him/her to pay you a visit.

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Dear Sam, I hope

this

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letter finds you well and are in

best

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the best

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spirits. I am writing

this

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letter to tell you that I changed my house recently and moved to a different

place

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because of certain reasons. Now, I am inviting you to visit

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place

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to spend some time together. As you know very well

that

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apply

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I was living with some students in a sharing basement. I was suffering from the nuisance all the time and unable to concentrate

upon

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my important tasks

such

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as playing loud music at night which made me frustrated.

Therefore

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, I moved from there to

new

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a new

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place

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. You will be amazed to see my new location. Actually, it is located in a rural and peaceful area. I moved into a house and shared it with one of my colleagues. It is

two-storey

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a two-storey

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building and we are living on

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ground floor and

enjoy

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enjoying

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the beauties of nature by relaxing

ourselves

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into

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their backyard. Even they provided us

different

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with different

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laundary

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laundry

, kitchen and parking spaces etcetera. I am damn sure that you will love that

place

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and it is not far from you. I am inviting you to visit there so that we can refresh our all childhood memories. I hope you will accept my invitation. Hope to hear back from you soon! Warm regards, Zen.

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure each paragraph contains a single main idea for better clarity.

Task Achievement

Avoid minor grammatical and spelling errors to enhance clarity and professionalism.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter starts with a friendly and appropriate greeting.

Task Achievement

The letter clearly explains the reason for moving, describes the new house, and extends an invitation.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

222 words

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