Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge and experience.

We, who live in the world today, need not know about past events.
This
essay will disagree with the topic because knowledge about past events help us prevent
reoccurrence
happening again (especially at regular intervals)
recurrence
recurrences
and gives us insight on how to manage our present lives. An English saying has it that, " once beaten, twice shy". The events of the past
has
Suggestion
have
every tendency to happen again, and learning about the past is needed to nip it in the bud, thereby, preventing a disaster from occurring.
For example
, scientific researchers made a prediction ten decades ago after the
first
tornado in North America that a similar natural event
will occur
Suggestion
occurred
in that location in the 20th century.
This
knowledge prompted their building of strong iron casts which has so far prevented a repeat of
such
earthquake in North America.
Furthermore
, knowing past events gives us insight to happenings in the world today and helps us manage our interactions better. The things we
heard
Suggestion
have heard
in history has helped us to form valid opinions in our dealing with each other to ensure our own is protected.
This
is demonstrated in the ethnic rivalry between the inhabitants of the northern and southern part of Nigeria which started in precolonial times with the former claiming that the
southerns
in or characteristic of a region of the United States south of (approximately) the Mason-Dixon line
southern
came to dominate and displace them in their land.
This
has led to several
killing
Suggestion
killings
of the Ibos living in the north, with the
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
presently opting to have their establishments within their domain. To conclude, I vehemently do not agree that seeking to know about the past has no value for people of
this
day seeing that it arms us with the knowledge to live right now and in the future.
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