The diagram and chart beneath give data about deals and offer costs for Coca Cola.
The pie chart and line graph illustrate
Coca
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Coca-Cola’s
Cola
’s volume of deals
which united different regions and the pay of fizzling Coca
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Coca-Cola
Cola
in the year 2000.
Overall
, the American Continent was the biggest market for Coca
Cola
while
its payment highly increased in this
period.
More specifically, the most volume of deals
of Coca
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Coca-Cola
Cola
was in North and Latin America which was 55 percent
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per cent
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Europe had over 20 Change preposition
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percent
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per cent
deals
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of deals
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more than Change the verb form
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the
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where
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percent
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per cent
deals
. The least amount of Change preposition
of deals
deals
was
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Middle
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the Middle
percent
. The total volume of Change the spelling
per cent
deals
were
17,1 billion.
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Coca
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Coca-Cola
Cola
had been just 33 dollar
in 1996, Change to a plural noun
dollars
however
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,however
this
cost increased to 68 dollar
in 1997. The peak was in 1998 Change to a plural noun
dollars
by
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at
dollar
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dollars
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Coca-Cola
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constantly decreased to 48 dollar
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dollars
dollar
in 2001.Change to a plural noun
dollars
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