A local college is having an International day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to your college head. Talk about the topic you are going to talk about. Explain why would they be of interest to students Ask about any arrangements you need to work to give the talk.
Dear Madam,
I got the news about the upcoming International Day in our college, and as a final year student of
this
institution, I would love to speak about my country Nigeria to other students from different parts of the world. I believe it will be a great moment for everyone.
I will be talking on the topic "multiple cultures and tourist attraction sites in Nigeria". While
I understand that much information about my country is on the internet, however
, only a few students have first-hand experience, of which I am one.
Africa at large is growing rapidly and diverse cultural spreads are taking place. I believe many would love to explore a few countries in Africa and it would please many students to hear about some tourist attractions sites they can travel to within Nigeria. This
will guide a few who have plans to tour Lagos and other parts of West Africa one day.
Therefore
, in order to achieve this
, I would love to know the necessary steps and arrangements needed to be made to be able to take this
presentation. I will come to the college admin as well to request more information.
I look forward to your feedback,
Yours faithfully,
MosesSubmitted by callmosomitoyin on
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