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Today single-use products are still very common. What are the problems associated with this? What are some possible solutions?

#single-use #products
With the advent of disposable products, sales of these products are increasing, and they are forming a large sector of our communal life in the contemporary society.
However
,
this
 practice has negative effects on the surrounding due to increased waste production.
Also
, there are reasonable solutions to address
this
 issue.
To begin
 with, the consumption of one time use
items
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item
contribute
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contributes
 to water pollution, which increasing the amount of waste in the water.
This
 means that some countries, that are bordering the ocean, dump
waste
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the waste
 by special vessels.
For example
, they endanger not only the ocean flora, but
also
fauna
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the fauna
 with scant regard for long term impact to some extent.
As a result
, some species becoming extinct and even plastic debris is found in the stomachs of fish, which can be poisoned, If eaten by
human
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humans
a human
.
Thus
, harm to nature will sooner or later harm man as well. To tackle
this
 problem, I would like to propose several measures.
Firstly
, government able to increase public awareness
to
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of
 the impact that plastics have on the environment throughout media or authorities should organise more community events
such
 as World ocean day, Coastal cleanup day and so forth. In
this
 way little help
from people
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from, people
 can save the world from global issues.
For instance
, at international coastal cleanup day, is held on September 15th, participants collect and take a note of trash that ending up on the coastline.
Therefore
, people play a vital role in addressing
this
 problem. To conclude, these days people are still interested in buying one way products.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental pollution
  • landfills
  • ecosystems
  • resource depletion
  • decompose
  • throwaway culture
  • sustainability
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • biodegradable
  • compostable
  • recycling
  • waste management
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