An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialize. Some people think that this has brought people closer together while others believe that people becoming isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Modern
life
has become easier for the people in the
world
, by using
internet
. These days, the
internet
took place of making people’s
life
easier between people to communicate faster,
such
as shopping online, order food online, etc.
However
, the
web
contains some disadvantages by using the
web
between families at home, which cause antisocial in the real
world
than virtually is more effective. More to know about the advantages and disadvantages of the
World
Wide
Web
(WWW).
To begin
, the digital transformation from real
life
to virtual communications through the
internet
has displayed us many advantages and in spite of disadvantages to our daily lives.
However
, the
internet
connected people around the
world
to get closer virtually at most. People can connect to each other by sending via or video call in a very short period for many purposes
such
as doing business, making new friends online, studying virtually, and more impressive facilitating communication.
For instance
, parents can contact their children who live in different countries by using via Skype and others in just a few minutes as compared to the past.
Moreover
the
web
, allows the people within an organization to easily communicate by via messages.
Consequently
, there have been a huge rise in using the
web
and it’s a good benefit.
Moreover
, the
internet
has positive effects are the disadvantages of (WWW) that should be considered as well. Due to the effectiveness of the cyberspace, when people communicate virtually and especially teenagers, they fall into a trap
such
as, phishing emails, cyber bullying etc. While older people they will be trapped by phishing mails, hacking etc. In the real
world
we can see in public places, people spend much time by using their technological phones than spending time talking with others verbally.
Nevertheless family
Accept comma addition
Nevertheless, family
and friends' relationship has become isolated because they have lost the interaction in real
life
.. Overall, the
internet
made our
life
easier, but we need to take responsibilities and interact with the real
world
and stay in contact always.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • Consumer behavior
  • Virtual marketplace
  • Cybersecurity
  • Digital footprint
  • Return policy
  • Comparison shopping
  • Customer reviews
  • Retail therapy
  • Logistics
  • User interface
  • Payment gateway
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