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In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than even before. However, they are less happy. WhAt might be the main reason of this? What can be done for this ?

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Nowadays
,
Accept space
,
young adults living in some parts of the world are less likely to enjoy a decent life even though they are financially healthy.
This
 essay intends to discuss the reasons for
this
 and suggest some solutions to alleviate the problem. Young people's lives are more secure, because with better economy and get everything to make their lives safer.
However
, they are the most unhappy and stressed lot. The
first
 reason for their dissatisfaction is that they are lured towards more luxurious things and wants to show off their lifestyle. Earlier, there were not advanced technology so children knew only what their parents and teachers told them, so they were happy and contented.
Furthermore
, young people have a lot of
competition
Suggestion
competing
 at global level to become successful or run their business, so there will be more chances to live under stressful conditions.Some young people blindly follow an advertisement and they are after their parents to purchase latest gadgets.
For instance
, they see a new cell phone and buy them, but very soon those models
also
 become obsolete and
this
 happiness becomes short lived.
However
, there are some solution to overcome
this problems
Suggestion
this problem
these problems
. Parents should help young people to develop a positive attitude towards life and the world. If youth will spend more time with their family members, it would help them to become happier. The government should have facilities for the children and youth, so they can compete in the global market. One should get realistic goals for themselves and try to find happiness in the small things of life. To sum up, young children of
this
 society have many distractions because of which they are less happy.
Although
, the situation can be dealt nicely by the efforts of parents and society.

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