Your Australian friend is thinking about making a short visit to your country, and intends to visit a particular tourist attraction during his/her stay. However, you feel that it would be better for your friend to visit a different tourist attraction. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good time for your friend to visit your country say why it would be better to visit a different tourist attraction suggest that you and your friend meet

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Dear Kiko, How are you? I hope everything is fine in Australia and that you have been well. I'm so glad that you are planning to visit me and you want to see the Nadoon pagoda around my hometown. I recommend you to come

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summer. Normally, it is from April to August because it is easy to travel without rain and

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it is a very good time for enjoyable many Thai's festivals.

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, it would be better to visit Patad Doi Sutep in Chang Mai because there are many kinds of transport to get there and more comfortable.

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, PatatDoi Sutep' history is very interesting that I would recommend you to visit

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place. I'm sure that you will love it. I suggest you fry to Chang Mai directly. I will wait for you at the airport and I can drive you to any

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during your stay. Best wishes, Piya

Fri May 08 2020

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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6 paragraphs

155 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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