An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Technologies have rapidly been changing since earlier the twenty-one century that allow implementing it everywhere and one of
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area became
education
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educated
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,
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implementation has brought not only positive
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as receiving
information
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from one resource and easier adaptation to modern demands, but
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negative in parts of the health of pupils and declining creativity.
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, few people can deny the fact that electronic devices
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are
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
for everything, thereby implementation they in educational process make it easier and adapt youth to the modern world.
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of,
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, many heavy books that in the past pupils used to carry, presently, they use one light
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thing
with all
information
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whatever they need.
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, today, previous generation have
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a problem
problems
with all electronic devices, thereby using it from school help after easier will start working.
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, pupils have many advantages of using
electronic device
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electronic devices
an electronic device
from the youngest age.
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, electronic devices with many positive have been bringing drawbacks
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as pupils only use prepared
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without any effort, have distracting factors as the internet with games and that for parents more disturbing it is
probelms
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
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the eye
eyes
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, all electronic devices
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are
fluoresce to contrast book is not, and influence
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light on eye of pupils is not studied.
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, all
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have been sending
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has been sent
has been sending
via the internet,
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teachers less can regulate an activity of students.
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, until society has controversial consequences in part of health and the almost
imposible
not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
impassible
impossibly
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to
control that youth do in electronic devices,
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implementation has drawbacks. To conclude, due to electronic devices is new for people and their impact not quite studied,
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, probably, they
was implemented
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were implemented
in educational process not in proper time. Notwithstanding, if bear in mind that all electronic devices rapidly changing for increasing of control for the internet and
diminishing influence
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the diminishing influence
on health, so probably in the closest future advantages will be
outweight
be heavier than
outweighed
taught
outright
disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interactive learning
  • Educational resources
  • Digital materials
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Investment
  • Distraction
  • Equality
  • Technology access
  • Technical issues
  • Prolonged use
  • Eye strain
  • Posture
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