Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Famous sports starts have a higher salary than workers in other relevant careers. Certain population think
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is fair, while others believe it is unjustified. The wealthy of
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people
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person
would be justified, because they
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pay
for their image as well, but many individuals think that their input to society is not so important as a doctor,
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. In my opinion, I agree with the sports professionals earn a great
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, due to it’s difficult to become in a sport celebrity. Some careers are fundamental in the society
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the health and education, and it doesn’t well paid. For one side medicals can help us to improve our health, and for the other side teachers can give us a great knowledge, for
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changing
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, both areas are not so valuable as they deserve.
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, in Chile professors only receive $1500 dollars approximately, a low remuneration for the
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, is the view that justified the high salary in professions related with sport
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as soccer or tennis players. In the elite leagues those persons can receive a salary
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absolutely different to any human.
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,
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amount is fair, because
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tickets or premium channels
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, their professions are very short, and start when are child,
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they
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a big sacrifice. In conclusion, in my view successful sport players have justified their remuneration, because they have many sources of
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. Perhaps would be unfair that they don’t obtain that
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, due to
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money
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would probably go to the entrepreneurs, and they don’t deserve
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial remuneration
  • exceptional
  • merit
  • talent
  • demand
  • entertainment value
  • career span
  • physical demands
  • justified
  • unfair
  • criticism
  • income inequality
  • societal priorities
  • sportsmanship
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