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The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.

The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.
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The bar graph provides information
of
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average
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the average
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 monthly temperature. The line graph gives data
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average
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 monthly precipitation in Kolkata over a year. We can see clearly that the figures for
climate
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 fluctuate considerably. It is noticeable that the highest
rainfall
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 is from June to September as opposed to the highest
climate
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 is in April and May.
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 the bar chart, the
rainfall
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 was just under 20
mm
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 in January. It increased steadily and in June, the
rainfall
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 was twice as high as
May
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in May
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. In July the
rainfall
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 reached a peak of around 340
mm
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 and it started to fall down dramatically again from August and stood at well under 10
mm
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 December. As shown in the line chart, the
climate
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 rose considerably from January to May (approximately 30 C). It reduced until July and stabilized at about 27
mm
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. The
climate
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 increased steeply until December by roughly 20 C.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words climate, rainfall, mm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "considerably" was used 2 times.
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