Some university students move away and live on their own while they are attending school, but others live at home with their family while they are students. Which do you think is a better choice? Give reasons to explain your answer.

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Many students and their parents get in a dilemma when it comes to allowing their child to
study
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while he's away or making him stay back
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and continue his higher studies from a local university. In my opinion, students must stay with their parents and pursue their education from their
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university as it guarantees a safe and secure
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for them to
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, while
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allowing students to be financially independent
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helping them to concentrate on their studies. It is a known fact that parents love and care for their children and ensure no harm comes their way.
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parenting ensures a safe and secure
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in which the student can focus on his studies.
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, a close friend of mine had gone to Canada for his higher studies. Soon reaching there, he started to have difficulty adjusting to the new
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and
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started feeling
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home sick
longing to return home
homesick
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, he had to quit his studies midway and return
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to his parents. Due to
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complex of feeling insecure in a new and an unknown
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, some students find it difficult to stay away from
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, for extended periods.
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, students who live alone, away from their parents and
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, often have to worry about their extra expenses. As they have to pay for the accommodation, food,
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material etc. They are compelled to work in a part
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job.
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is not the case with those students who stay
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with their parents and are able to focus on their education.
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, almost 90% of Cambridge University student living in college hostel complained of not getting sufficient
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to complete their assignments and tutorials which have negatively affected their grades.
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, students who stay
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are able to devote more
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towards their coursework, since they do not have to work part
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to pay for any the above expenditures. In conclusion, In my opinion, students are far better off staying with their parents while they are studying.
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way a student can better focus on his lectures and get good grades as his parents are close by to take care of him and he does not need to worry about paying for any extra expenditures.
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