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In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Write about 250 words.

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In the recent era, the
education
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 is included in the fundamental rights of the citizens. In fewer under
develop
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developed
 nations the children are unable to get the basic study. Few people hold that the higher authorities should increase the quantities of schools and mentors, but others are in favour of upgrade the network system. I firmly stand by the former viewpoint
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 In my coming paragraphs
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 I shall shed light on both sides with my own agreement. Starting with the infrastructure and services side, by swinging up the number
education
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 institutions, the students do not need to go far from the village to get the knowledge
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 So, the enrolment of the students will swore.
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if there is a primary or secondary
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school
 in every rural
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area, then
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 the little ones can access the
education
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 facilities without any
inconvience
an inconvenient discomfort
inconvenience
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, with the numerous quantity of the trainers
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 the students can get the proper guidance. So
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 I think the government should knock the door of proper facilities and faculties in an
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 system.
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, few human beings are on the side of providing an internet service
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 The students will be able to attend online classes according to their own time flexibility. To illustrate
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 in the
country side
rural regions
countryside
 areas the young children share their hands with their parents in the farms and other domestic works
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 The fast internet service helps them to attend the classes anytime after completion of the household tasks. There is no time limit to attend classes. I think
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 the administration should enhance the number of schools and trainers in the villages to dim the light of the
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