The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Every year, Numbers of Car users are increasing exponentially. Many problems have been caused by people using their private 4 wheelers to travel. Increasing pollution and
Road
accidents are the two main issues
arises
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arising
due to
this
. In my view, discouraging the
use
of cars makes total sense.
This
can be done by encouraging People to
use
more of public transport and innovation in new technology that are
environment
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environmentally
friendly like CNG cars, Electric bus etc.
Firstly
, Most of the automobiles in the market
use
Petrol and Diesel as a fuel.
However
, both the fuels are
main contributor
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the main contributor
main contributors
to the most harm full greenhouse gas which is Carbon dioxide. Due to
this
, pollution level always remains high in urban areas.
On the other hand
, Vehicles that run on fuels
such
as CNG and Electricity do not generate any kind of Polluting gas.
For instance
, In Delhi all the public buses have been completely shifted to CNG and metro rail operates on Electric power which helps to lower the GHG level up to a great extent. If government starts focusing on making Public transport that takes compressed gas and electric power as fuel than it will greatly help to fight Pollution and gains public preference.
Secondly
, higher the number of vehicles on
road
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the road
more will be the cases of
Road
accidents. Apparently,
this
is the case with most of the developed cities.
For example
,
last
year a million cases of
road
accident have been
registed
(of animals) officially recorded with or certified by a recognized breed association; especially in a stud book
registered
in Delhi alone.
Hence
, promoting Public transportation say
for example
Buses and Metros will certainly reduce the numbers of fatalities.
On the other hand
,
this
will reduce the congestion on
road
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the road
a road
roads
which
further
lowers the chances of any mishap.
This
essays
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essay
has discussed the main outcomes of maximizing Car
use
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e.
road
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Road
fatalities and rising pollution level. It
also
tells that relying more on
environment
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environmentally
friendly fuels
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
fossil and promoting public transportation will encourage people to go for Public mode of transportation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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