Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job. To what extent do you agree?

I have completed under-graduation and graduation in Economics from the Shahjalal
University
of Science & Technology Sylhet, Bangladesh. Bangladesh is a labour-intensive country and has a high source of income in the RMG sector and FDI. Along with that, we have natural resources like gas and coil. Bangladesh is heading towards
Middle Income Country state
Suggestion
a Middle Income Country state
from Least Developed Country.
However
, the lack of efficient plans, proper nurture of innovative business and economic ideas, and policies are the barriers for the economy to reach the optimum level. To
work
on the economic growth of Bangladesh, I become passionate to have my higher studies in abroad. While searching for universities in Europe, the Economics
department
of the
Friedrich-Schiller
University
of Jena gets my attention. In Europe, faculty members of the Economics
department
are the best.
Moreover
, the
department
is focused on Innovation and Change,
Economics
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Economic
Strategy, and Regional Dynamics, which I am looking for my higher studies in the master programme. I believe the vast knowledge, diverse experience, and innovative ideas of your
university
will help me to think and improvise outside the box. While the
university
, I have completed my graduation and post-graduation from, is
top ranked
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the top ranked university
university
in Bangladesh, I feel that to get more
research
oriented higher education, I should pursue my higher education from abroad.
In
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At
On
that point, the
university
which comes to my mind
first
is the
Friedrich-Schiller
University
of Jena which is ranked as one of the best in Germany. The specialization areas of the
Friedrich-Schiller
University
of Jena are Innovation and Change,
Economics Strategy
Accept comma addition
Economics, Strategy
, Regional Dynamics and so on. In my undergrad, I have completed a
course
called ‘
Research
Methodology’ which has significantly increased my desire for
research
work
. In that manner, I worked on a
research
project titled ‘Main Obstacle in Improving the Living Standards and Quality of Life of Tea Garden Workers’ under my
course
teacher. To conduct the
research
work
, I learned how
to make
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making
a questionnaire, data collection, mining, and
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
data. I have
also
learned necessary statistical tools to generate our
research
work
smoothly,
such
as STATA and EVIEWS. What is important to mention that, during my graduation level, I studied microeconomics, macroeconomics, mathematics, statistics,
econometrics
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Econometrics
econometric
. Our mathematics
course
was arranged vastly, some applied topics
was included
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were included
, like game theory. After completing my post-graduation, I joined as a Data Entry Officer for SUCHANA project, a project run by Save the Children aiming to improve the nutritional condition of adolescent girls and children in Sylhet division, one of the eight divisions in Bangladesh which lasted for three months. After that, I have joined as a Monitoring & Evaluation Officer in FIVDB, an NGO, where I was responsible for monitoring daily
work
of my team members by Web MIS, preparing daily reports, allocating all sorts of data, and
also
preparing monthly progress data sheets. To
persue
carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
pursue
my dream in academia, I am working now as a lecturer in the
department
of Economics at the Universal College, Sylhet. I believe that the teaching experience will help me to pursue the master programme at the
Friedrich-Schiller
University
of Jena. During my study in
university
, I have participated in different events, social activities, cultural, and voluntary groups at my
university
. I served as a Treasurer (2011-2012) and worked with the Tourist Club, SUST for three years. I organized three times of annual tour in Cox’s Bazar for around 30-35 people and many picnics for different
departments
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departments'
department's
department
students and teachers.
Besides
this
, I have
also
acquired a LICT (Leveraging Information & Communication Technology) degree on Foundation skill & Graphics Design, Passed on NASSCOM Certification Test. I hope these activities will help me to become a more responsive learner
in
Suggestion
on
the entire
course
. To sum up, gathering a degree from a German institution like the
Friedrich-Schiller
University
of Jena will be a great esteem for me. I think the curriculum of the Economics
department
is a perfect match for me. I am confident enough that with all my acquired knowledge, I will be able to continue your difficult path of
master’s programme
Suggestion
the master’s programme
master’s programmes
successfully and will try to achieve the best candidate appellation through my activities.

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