Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, how to punish wrong does is a hot issue in some countries in the world. Some people believe that certain captives could be punished by doing

community

services without salary rather than being kept in jails.

This

essay shall discuss

both

sides of the argument before concealing with a clear opinion. On the one hand, doing

community

services sentence is not conformable fo

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hose who took part in serious crimes

such

as organized robbery or murder. It is true that those people could take advantage of

community

services by bringing forbidden things into jails namely drugs, alcohol, or knives to seek profit.

Then

, the worst situation could happen is those dangerous crimes escaping from prison and posing a serious threat to society.

Therefore

, those offenders should be received prison sentences for protecting honest people.

On the other hand

, there are some people committing minor crimes might be

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such

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re not serious to serve a prison sentence. Governments should take unpaid

community

jobs into consideration to punish them

such

as cleaning stress or planting trees. Because keeping those people in the

community

could help them

both

developing empathy to others and having a chance of rehabilitation or make a fresh start after realising.

Thus

, doing unpaid

community

services are better solutions than custodial sentences for those types of crimes. In conclusion, those people who commit crimes always is chastised adequately in jails or doing

community

services. As

both

arguments seem valid to some extent, it seems to me that

community

services are benefits for

both

certain offenders and society. In the foreseeable future, we might see fewer people break the law.