Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, how to punish wrong does is a hot issue in some countries in the world. Some people believe that certain captives could be punished by doing
community
services without salary rather than being kept in jails. This
essay shall discuss both
sides of the argument before concealing with a clear opinion.
On the one hand, doing community
services sentence is not conformable for t
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such
as organized robbery or murder. It is true that those people could take advantage of community
services by bringing forbidden things into jails namely drugs, alcohol, or knives to seek profit. Then
, the worst situation could happen is those dangerous crimes escaping from prison and posing a serious threat to society. Therefore
, those offenders should be received prison sentences for protecting honest people.
On the other hand
, there are some people committing minor crimes might be not convicted a
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re not serious to serve a prison sentence. Governments should take unpaid community
jobs into consideration to punish them such
as cleaning stress or planting trees. Because keeping those people in the community
could help them both
developing empathy to others and having a chance of rehabilitation or make a fresh start after realising. Thus
, doing unpaid community
services are better solutions than custodial sentences for those types of crimes.
In conclusion, those people who commit crimes always is chastised adequately in jails or doing community
services. As both
arguments seem valid to some extent, it seems to me that community
services are benefits for both
certain offenders and society. In the foreseeable future, we might see fewer people break the law.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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