Many people join distance‐learning programs (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

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Online

education

had brought significant changes to our life in recent days.

people

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People

spend most of their time not only in playing games

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surfing the

things but

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things, but

also

some people

enroll

enrol

for online

education

and use their time effectively.

However

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some people think it's not an effective way than traditional systems like university or colleges.

This

essay will discuss the benefit of

distance

learning

program

with supporting examples. In recent days

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Modernization has increased and people start to use the internet in effective ways

such

distance learning

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a distance learning program

distance learning programs

program

.Online

education

enables students to study at their own place that means students can study whatever and

when ever

at whatever time

whenever

they want.With the technology innovation

education

system are widespread all over the area.Even the employed people can join the course simultaneously that would enhance the knowledge in their particular field.There is an opportunity for the people to interact with the team of different culture that would develop the communication skill which is mandatory for the interview process.

Secondly

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several

distance

learning

program

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programs

have emerged which wasn't available in colleges or university.

students

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Students

get the chance to learn from the upcountry professors or

scholar which

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scholar, which

would help

for

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their career growth.Due to

this

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the pollution that affects health can be reduced as well as people can save more time than before.

For example

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if the students want to do PHD for the rarest course

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the same can be done online

instead

searching for the scholar for the training as well as pregnant women have pursued their dreams by doing

distance

education

.Another example

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By using the technologies like 3D that makes the lessons more interesting than college lessons.

Therefore

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it is apparent that

distance

education

is a worthwhile for the people.

However

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it doesn't mean that

education

univeristy

the body of faculty and students at a university

university

or college can be fully neglected Some people believe that offline

education

makes them comfortable than online

education

. To conclude

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due to the technology innovations that makes the opportunities to the people to pursue their career in an effective and efficient manner.

Hence I

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Hence, I

agree that

distance

learning

program

has more benefit compared to university

education

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Many people join distance‐learning programs (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think that a person intellectual skill improving more when they doing group study.What extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organisers. In your letter:  Explain why you are interest in helping  Give details suitable past experience  Suggest ways you might help with the event

In order to study effectively, it requires comfort, peace and time. So it is impossible for a student to combine learning and employment at the same time because one distracts the other. Is it realistic to combine them at the same time? Support your opinion with examples.